So I spent the day worrying about things...and making my script better. I also realized that I have been sending everyone my first draft by accident and the first draft is shitty!!!! So maybe dude saying I needed to hone my craft and I have more in common then I first thought.
After a day stressing about this shit I feel better knowing that I have achieved something and I can make things tighter and edit things to a better product.
I just need an artist now.