Watched the rest...almost. I couldn't get through it. It is that bad. Too violent for what it is. Too deadpan for what it is. Not funny enough. Trying too hard to be funny. What was with all the Nazi imagery? Is that supposed to be ironic?
Anywho, I'm going to make an open statement asking Miller to stay away from film until All-Star Batman and Robin is finished. Please. Just finish up your strange Batman and Robin trip for your fans that like your comics...and then drift off into movie world again.
This is what I don't get. Ronin probably got optioned. The last Batman movie was based on your idea...kinda. 300 got made into a movie. Sin City got made...and has a sequel in the works. MAKE comic Frank...you're good at it and they will probably get optioned. At this point you can ask to be director, and then you can learn a little bit.
In the meantime make comics...and short films to get better at that.